Hey, that was fantastic. absolutely fantastic. you're a great poet.
good ending, good beginning, good
title, good rhyme. everything was
perfect or at least I think so.
take care,
marjan

Wow. Excellent work Josh. Very well done.

I love the idea of that special world. Oh ye, it would be so good.

I wish there was a place like that lol.

Very well done. You got me caged in that dream haha. Too bad I have to get out of it an face reality.

Keep up the good work Josh,
Lotsa love,
-xxx-
Mona

Amazing josh...truly brilliant
xxx

Awe Josh I like this poem very much. I know what you are going through, at least something good like this comes out of something not so great. Loved it!