Omg... so sad... hun if you need anything, please let me know. I hope you're okay. Great poem though, you did a great job at expressing the pain

Short to the point which was good in its own way. I like the usage of story though.
~FotF

I can see my life story
Flashing in front of me

Lol that is exactly what i was thinking while reading your poem, it i sso true, this is a really gr8 poem i loved it. BTW thanx for teh comment, deeply appreciated.
Katelyn xoxo