Comments : Please come home dad

  • 14 years ago

    by Matt Carroll

    I couldnt have said it better...and lord, do I wish my dad would come home...7 years since he left...wonderful work, 5/5 keep it up.

    hold fast and rest easy,
    ~Matt~

  • 14 years ago

    by Jen

    Oh, this poem's sad! Its good though! Really good! Keep writing! Great job!

  • 14 years ago

    by christina marie

    Awwwww! i love it! it's sooooo sweet! i hope he comes home soon!

    Xo*Xo
    **Lollipop Sweetie**

  • 13 years ago

    by NoPatience

    W0w, This Poem Is So Emotional. Great Work..... 5/5

    x0x LoveLustTragedy x0x

  • 13 years ago

    by lonelynow

    I love the structure, the rhyming is great, the content is beautiful. it has so much emotion..

    it's a really well written poem.

    well doen :D

  • 13 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I loved this...I can relate...it almost made me cry.
    I loved the imagery, flow and rhyme scheme.
    The wording touched me deep.
    Excellent.

  • I love this poem as - like so many people - I can relate. Love your work! xx Daniella