Comments : My Own Downfall

  • 18 years ago

    by alwaysremeniceus

    Thats so sweet... yes.. they'll always be with s in our minds and hearts... part of them will be in our soul... :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    Super work. I can tell that there was a lot of emotion put into this.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jackie Marie

    Awesome work! Keep it up! I [ [l o v e] ] it..lol

  • 18 years ago

    by fastforward

    Wooooooowwwwwwwwww.....
    you are captain WORDS.
    my GOD.

    :)
    wonderful.

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    0hh huni l0t 0f em0ti0n in this piece. very t0uching 0nce again. d0nt ever regret nething darl. u just n0 f0r next time. if u get me? neway keep it up

    l0tz 0f l0ve / d0ra
    -*x00o00x*-

  • 18 years ago

    by Izzie

    I love your poem. its really awesome. both for that the poem is awesome and that you can admitt to yourself and others that you did something wrong. you must be an awesome person!

  • 18 years ago

    by Gesselle Valle

    You're such a sweet and amazing poet. It's a very sad poem I most say...but beautiful writing. Always take care my friend... you're great!

  • 18 years ago

    by Nearly but not quite

    I know how you feel, from the girl's point of view too. How do you write such structured poems but they're so accurate?

  • 18 years ago

    by Ûµ.Autumn.Ûµ

    You are in my mind and heart.
    That is why we could never be apart.
    Leaving you will always be my biggest regret.
    Memories of you I cannot forget.

    that was my favorite part. I know how you feel...sorta lol

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    Aw wow. This was sad too. Have you noticed how I'm reading all your sad poems and not the love ones? Lol..

    But this was really good, And you said you did it as a freestyle but it all flowed really well. Well, Yeah, It did. It was really good. Loved it! 5/5

    .x.TaLeEe.x.