by Angie
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OK, this is not like you, whats going on???? This is quite powerful, but there is another meaning behind it and I'd like to know whats up....... I'm sorry if your feeling so down, but remember I am here if you need me. |
by Ann Stareyes
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Bill, I'm like Angela now....what's going on, my friend? This one don't speak of all that wonderful love....I'm confused....If you need me Bill, I'll listen and try to help.... |
by Lu
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I am so sorry you have these feelings my friend ... but one day at a time ..yes !! |
by cLumsy
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So touching and beautiful! its a different phrasing, but i love how you can capture the reader's attention with short words! great job! ;D 5/5 |
by TinyDancer46
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Can't get over how talented you are at writing... great job!! =) |
by lilia
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Wow that was amazing. so true. 5/5 if you get a chance check out my poems and tell me what you think!! |
by Felicia
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I love it why does it have such a low rateing? This is Talent! lol heres a 5/5 |