My g0d u use such great w0rds. such a great piece. i really liked it. g0od j0b 0n it darl! beautifully written! very heartfelt! keep em c0ming!! als0 thank u s0 much f0r ur c0mments 0n my w0rk they truly mean al0t t0 me! =)
l0t 0f l0ve/d0ra

Very Nice Tribute...Well Done!!!

I just got out of the hospital for ODing on XTC but i think u wrote a good poem about it

WO! what a way to woo!
great writing!

Now, this is a love poem in every sense! Heartfelt and heart-warming, your metaphors describe a great angel here. I have no doubt she'll get lost in these words :) Amazing write!
Take care

WONDERFUL!.. Had me totally captivated :)

All the Best ~ Olwin

Excellent!

Oh-la-la...who wouldn't melt with this?