My heart to yours

It was good but some of your words didnt make sense. Like, shouldn't 'sent' be 'since' and 'it' be 'it's'? Other than that, pretty good. 4/5

Im ahh totally speechless... short, sweet, yet breath-taking at the same time.. amazing job... keep writing you have talent.. read sum of mine and let me know wut u think of them..

**meggie**

Its a good poem. It touches the heart. Good job, Mechelle.

I thought that this was good although i want you to work on a little something for me: although your rhyme schemes make it very easy for anybody to read and relate, maybe you could make them a bit more complex and constructive-this is my only constructive critiscim. Despite that i liked the raw emotion that came out and thought it was a well structured piece. Good Work

Sondos

Thanks for you voice