Loved the flow. Excellent title, especially since it really had little to do with the words in the poem but shared a deep meaning with the poem. Loooooooved it. The only thing that bother me was that you used the word 'And' at the beginning of 5 lines in 3 of your stanzas. That was a little irritating but wouldnt make me deny you your 5/5 :) Good work

I LOVE this poem

Very raw...but good.You have better,but this is still really good.You're very talented...you should consider publishing some of your writings.

This is fantastic. I honestly wish I could write with half as much depth as you do..

You're very intimidating!!
This is good :]
5/5

This create an amazing image for me and i could really feel the poem, nice one.

This is amazing ur rly talented this spoke to me 5/5