I like it ... its very creative. good job...

It was all right i liked the other 3 more still good thoo

Aww hunni, this poem is beautiful. You should tell him how you feel though, don't be scared =) Great job!

Wow, that's real pretty..yeahhh. I liked it.

Umm. about hat comment you left on Twist ending--- She hid her kid under the bed, then she thought she ran away to call the police- BUT she didnt!!! she killed the kid!! xD
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I thought it was funny 'cause it said she ran away and left her kid behind. and the part where it said it slipped. xD hilarious.