Comments : She

  • 18 years ago

    by libby

    "But dont we all desire the best?"
    Yes, we do, and we all deserve it as well. We don't always recognize it though, which is part of the problem.

    I love it when you talk to yourself, like in the last stanza.

  • 18 years ago

    by Cuddles

    Excellent poem. Wonderfully written.