Nice phrasing.

I read through your profile and read some of your poems.

All I have to say is taht you have written more poems in a year than I have in my life and they are good too.

I love this poem and i understand what u mean when u say everyword in this poem...keep up the great work and never change...5/5

Umm this was a pretty good poem... well written... the ryming was a lil rough but over all it was pretty good.. keep it up

sammie

Amazingly beautiful !!

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Beutifully said...keep it up!!
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That was really beautiful!!! I'm curious to what exactly it was about!! But it was very touching and emotional!! Great job!!! Keep writing!!

Hey.. gr8 job wit this poem.. nice rhyme, and gr8 words.. v deep.. and i liked ur flow.. it was reli heart-felt.. and almost made me cry.. i gez u reli loved the guy (if it was true)..
i so love ur last stanza
keep it up
NannO

I like this style better then the poems with the short lines. Great job

Wow! i luv the flow of this poem its so smooth and the meaning is plain and simple, but intresting words put together for a gr8 sweet meaning! keep writing! :)
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