Awe...omg. that is so sad. I really hope it isnt about you. If it is i'm endlessly sorry. I love this poem though.!!

Oh, this is so sad. it reminds me of my father a little. is all of wut u write about true? if it is, some of it sounds like my life. i like how u used moomy and daddy, i dont kno why, i just did. it wouldnt have been as good if u had called them something else but this is just my opinion. nice job

Wow good poem, i agree with 'megadrive' about the layout and stuff, but maybe the idea was to have it written how it was thought.... oh well, great poem keep it up
xxxx

Wow i loved this sad poem
its truley deep

5/5
lana