Sad poem, touched me. Sorry if something similiar really happend to you
dwight

Oh my gosh...that poem is so sad, made me want to cry. You have such great talent, keep the writting up.

xxxMeg

Wow I really loved this poem one question though is this a true story?
If so I'm so sorry its really sad.

Amazing... i love how you wrote it... so so sad.... but extremly well written.. keep it up.. your a great writer...

sammie

It's a great poem but so shocking and sad. I am sorry for the loss - it's true how life can be cruel. Also thanks for the comment you gave me. You have great talent for writing its just a shame that there is no good to write for.

Very good! very emotional you can feel what everyones going through, btw thanks for the comment!

xxx
Angel

Great poem, very sad!
~~Sweetie

Wow really powerful poem! It's so sad...