Once apon a time

by sammy jo   Dec 8, 2005


Once apon a time there was a little girl, she was a normel girl,(at first) and loved her mother and father very much,
one day she was sitting on her swing and a boy ran by, a little boy he age, once the little boy saw the little girl he stopped. A hour later after the two children were playing in the woods pushing each other on the swing the little boy stopped and looked into the little girls eyes and kissed her. the little girl looked at the litttle boy and after a minute the little boy said,
\"will you be my girlfriend?\"
\"oh, yes,oh yes,\" she said with a big smile on her face,
\"but you have to promis me somthng,\"
whats that?\"
\"you always have to be my girlfriend, and never love anyone else.\"
\"nobody else?\" the little girl looked at the little boy, and he shuck his head no.\"alright nobody else i promis, forever and ever,\"
after a couple years the kids were 14 and 13 and in highschool but the little girl fell in love with another boy. and the little boy looked out his window one day and saw them swinging on there swing and that boy kissing his little girl frind. (now the little girl wasnt as close tothe little boy anymore he was a \"DORK\" and she was a prep and he wasnt cool anymore, but hse would still talk to him sometimes the little boy still loved her a still thought of her as his girlfriend. but the little girl had a nother boyfriend. when the little boy found this out he went to his closet and brought out his knife and rope. and killed himself. but before he did he wrote a note saying this.
\" I love you, so much, I thought you said you loved me and would never love anyone else? I always loved you, but you broke your promis,\"

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  • 18 years ago

    by dragon

    Another good one. Like this one even more. It tells the stroy well. Nice job