Hey, that was interesting and very unique I think. I liked the choice
of words and I liked the third stanza
the best.
much love and happiness,
marjan

Hi, Carrie.Really liked this piece-it has a real sing-song rhyme scheme flow when reading it, and such an excellent use of language.Your images are great and ver effective at conveying the emotions that pulse throughout this poem.I see we share an interest in poetry and music(check my profile/poems if you get a chance, and you'll see what I mean).Anyway, I hope you are still writing and will soon be posting more of your work.Really love the last stanza in this, a lot of impact.Great poem.Take care.
Gary

Hi Carrie
I enjoyed reading this poem, and I've been checking since for more posts. Don't leave us in suspense for too long!