Beautiful! :))

Really beautiful and great poem. You're a great poet Ali! ^_^ Thank you so much for your comment on mine, it almost made me cry....(happy tears). Take care and thanks for sharing.

That is a very sweet poem Ali. You have alot of talent, keep it up.

Sweet poem......i liked the way u described the girl.....very cute !!!

Beautiiful! is that a realy story??? :0)
really loved it.....

luv,
Bharti

Its so nice aNd swEet!!!~ 5/5 kEep up the gOod wOrk~~ ^^