Awww mona, what can i say?
i slightly feel a smile at the end of this poem because 'Mr.Phobia' has been beaten and he's been showed who's boss
hehe yeah!!!! go u!
i love ya lotsss sweetums keep it up!

Truly great!
Really liked the scheme and layout aswell
Love it!!
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Tis a cool poem well dun, nice morally and nice rhyming scheme, good work lol xx

Tis a cool poem well dun, nice morally and nice rhyming scheme, good work lol xx

Aww huni!! i love this poem!!!
im so proud of you=) hows beating mr phobia going?
im sorry about your friend huni, its really a sweet poem.
chin up baby..
love ya lots
xoxo

Very well written....I'm like in aw, very good!-xxx-