--This poem sucks a superlot. haha. --

You are so wrong with this one, This poem displays on the thoughts that everybody has like James' hair is greasy as hell and he
smells like rotten bologna.
Yet for some strange reason
Carla loves him,

Im sure everybody has thought at one point in their lifetime, Why is He with her or He doesn't deserve her, this was a good poem so I give it a 5/5 out of good job

I don't think it sucks. Brings up a good point in my mind. Defiantly an amazing write. 5/5 none to less. xx: blaine

*> : PainOfOne

That poem does not suck! i so totally agree! Some people just let their s.o. get away with murder! glad i found someone who agrees with me... i do think it would be better if you made it rhyme...but if that's not your style that's cool.. well see ya round