Really truely that is a brilliant poem. its written very well and really captures the readers attension.

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Wow....fing amazing. Nicely done!!!!!!!!! Beautiful, yet dark....i love the twist...

lol!! I was so drawn to this poem because just the other day some person that I really love called me a succubus and I had to look it up, and up until that point I had never heard that word before in my life....so to see it again was kind of ironic, but wow....this poem is amazing. Two thumbs up! hehe

5/5