Heart touching poem....very expressive...there was a beautiful flow to it....take care and keep writing...

Wow!! great poem!! this one is really amazing.
honestly dear...this one was very different for what you have been writing so far. uneven stanzas.... long lines... & then the way you expressed pain...forget about relating mysel with this poem...as for some moment i had a thought as if i m the one who wrote it...i swear and i m not joking... it was so much like how i write & i dont know if thats a compliment or a stinking comment... whatever... i loved this one

Heyy thats very hearfelt poem like this line lot .....
"I thought it had once give me the best gift *you*"
its us who choose to b happy or sad not circumtances, be happy , time is best healer .

kepp writing
love
chavii.

This is very touching hun. and like chavii sed time is the best healer