Comments : Lost pieces

  • 18 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    Wow... I'm so glad you wrote another poem, I've been waiting for you to =) This is amazing, I hope that things work out, cause you deserve someone incredible! Great poem hun

  • 18 years ago

    by sara lynn

    I like the opening line a lot.... it is really good... it grabs you right into the poem....

    "I almost told you today-"

  • 18 years ago

    by Ruthie

    Really beautiful! *grins* loved it. very unique 2 i loved how u opened and ended the poem... really great work darls! .... thanks 4 the lovely comment btw! :D