This is deep ... I read and hear about this type of thing almost everyday... Isn't it sad...... Your awsome ... Keep up the good work...5/5

Awwe where did you come up with that its cute but rather sadning ... 5 for you

That happen to my little brother this was a touching poem keep up the good work 5/5

WHOA!!! thats soooo sad......ive always hatted babysitters!!!! it was really good 5/5 keep it goin!!!

WHOA!!! thats soooo sad......ive always hatted babysitters!!!! it was really good 5/5 keep it goin!!!

Wow, thats really touched me

Wow, thats really touched me

Wow this is intense. Where did you come up with the inspiration for this? If this is a real story about someone you know then I'm very sorry, but it made one great poem, this is probably my favorite one. I liked it a lot.

That was really harsh. After I read the title, I couldnt believe it was under sadness and depression, but the way you wrote it, it just snuck up on me. It was really good.

That poem was great

Omg im crying...its so so so sad
i msorry
please find the strength to be strong...
u'll be in my prayers...
dhaval.

Thats sad...... good poem tho.
Love Always Tiffany HEather

Wow ... really deep... you can actually feel like ur standin there ... wow really good

Wow, It sounded exactly like the words that a child would use... some people go into touch detail with things like this...things that a child would never really say... but you made it sound as if it really was... You did a very nice job on this one! Keep up the good work!

Wow that is a very good poem...you are an awsome writer