Wow.. this is reli gud.. im reli amazed.. gr8 job with this one.. didnt rhyme, but it cudnt hv bin better than this.. ur words wer very powerful and explained the mood well
dunno y no1 read it or commented.. this is awesome
keep up the gr8 work
NannO

Good poem, all your poems are good. VERY POWERFUL.
keep it up

Great poem i loved it!!

Wow... i honestly love how you write! your poems are all so creative and are just amazing! i really like this one its so great! keep it up

sammie

Wow... i honestly love how you write! your poems are all so creative and are just amazing! i really like this one its so great! keep it up

sammie