Wow, that's very deep. i loved it. thaks for commenting on my poems. I don't have them all on the site yet. i'm still working on it. i love your poetry :p

This isn't your best, but it is pretty good...

I'm not sure really how to critize it or what to say, forgive me.

xDarkSuicidex

This poem rocks, very sad, keep up the great work 5/5

Nice rhymes and flow. Not one of your best but still good.

p.s. said I would do them all!
definately going in favourites.

Nice rhymes and flow. Not one of your best but still good.

p.s. said I would do them all!
definately going in favourites.

I really enjoyed this, and I can really relate to the stanza about your father.
I liked the imagery and I found the wording very good.