Wow! It's terrific. Um, yeah, I don't have the best relationship with my dad either. I loved it.

Beautiful but sad ..

xxx

Aww so sad, broke my heart to read....My dad use to treat me so bad, but he is still in my life....So sorry to read this, hope things will get better for you soon, Please be strong!!!

Much Love Sabrina

I love this poem, this one, i found nothing wrong with, i too dont have a "daddy" and i write about him alot, two of my poems about him are "Hes still half of me" and "daddys little girl" I know how you feel and its also great that you can express how you feel. hopefully one day, he'll see that hes made a mistake...but the thing is...will you let him back in?

I didnt meet my father until I was 14.... and though I have only known him a few years. He has changed my life so much. I felt he hated me. I felt I was broken. But now I feel better, that my life isnt so horrible. You need a hug hun

Oh it's soo sad! Really emotional! Very good!

Great job. Unfortunately too many 'dads' are like this (know mine was)
Lovely simple wording and flow. Nice job.