Hell0 darl. g0od j0b 0n the p0em. a t0uching piece. very well written! great j0b. thank u s0 much f0r the c0mment 0n my w0rk! meant al0t t0 me! =)
l0tz 0f l0ve /d0ra

Thanks for the comment you also did a good job on your poem its written well
keep up the good work

=( I love this, because I can relate to it so much! I lost a kid I love because I hurt him, but I never meant to. I hope that you're okay, and that everything works out. I really enjoyed reading this poem, you did a great job expressing emotions. Fantastic job hun!

Hey gurl u did a great job, touching piece of work.. keep it up! 5.0!

Hey gurl i love this poem it is very deep and has a great meaning :D good job and hey thanks for the comment on "pregnant at 14" it means a lot to me !! -Amirah

Gurl i love this poem keep it up!

This was a great show of all you hurt emotions and depression. Great job in expressing your feelings, and an excellently penned piece or work!

5/5