Great poem i loved it so much!!!!!!!!

Ok awesome...now this is more like it....second stanza was a little shaky but u made up for it. I really liked it. You did great.

::MELI::

0hh hun a very t0uching and heartfelt piece. very well written. g0od j0b 0n it!! have an awes0me year darl!! =)

l0tz 0f l0ve -*x00o00x*-
d0ra

This was a great poem i would like to see more from you!!!!! we have went throw the same thing so if any time you want to talk i am at sweetendme@yahoo.com

Awww, that one was sad. I liked it a lot, it really deserved the 5/5

Loved it.