I love this poem Tenisha it send sivers down my spine. your poems are such a beautiful way to put down all your thoughts and you do it soo well. it makes you think about someone else point of veiw instead of just your own!. i really love your style of writing, it's different and a lot like a journal. keep writing! 5/5

Those are so the questions on my mind... 5/5

To me life is the bird you capture in your hands. . .
When you want to go you let the bird go.
When it's time to go the bird pecks you and it flys away.
My metaphoric way of visualising it
love Em
P.S great poem

I thinks gr8 very much in touch wit life i understand it very well i cud relate 2 keep it up !!

Wow this poem is deep makes u think alot good job i love it

keenan

Very good i liked it.try putting it into stanza's though.

Very chilling......it actually sounds like it has truth to it.......keep up the good work....(oh btw 5/5)

Life's hard but you're here and that's all there is to know. take care, Good stuff. :)