WOWZER!!! another brill poem!!! the alliteration was very hard to say though... i loved these lines:

So breathe out those sounds, as solid as the bitter
Morning mist from your lungs

actually i loved it all, but that was osoooo grooviliscious!

xXx

Your words usually are spatterings of sound tho lu and they totally rock!!! :D You were nominated for the award of best made up word of the year at Hol's Pols and u sooo deserved it! But then your words always mean so much to so many of us (including me!) cuz they're always so wonderful and loving and in that way we most definitely can know you're brilliant person and fantastic friend m'dear. Anyhoo I'll stop wittering now, i only wanted to tell you how amazing your poem was and now I've written an essay!