I like your styll

Super work, this poem had good flow and rhyme through the whole thing.

You are a VERY good writer! How long have you been writing poetry? I wonder I wonder. . .*

Great job!

I think this could have used some more, but for what you have i think it's great 5/5

Simple but effective, its very good.

well done

5/5

It was short but it was very powerful i think you did so good♥

You had reality written in these lines. Though short you had the truths right there. However though, I'd love to see more lines added to make the poem louder and more powerful, I think this has potential for something more. Still, maybe it's just me. =)

These are strong words used and it helps to make the mood evaporated from these lines much more weighted. I like your works. Thanks for sharing.

All ur poems are short but you get the emotion and the meaning out really well I like this one!
Juls