Omg i love it.its great.i would of done teh same if i found my man with some 1 else hehehe keep it up u got a talent sparking
~*~Jamilla~*~

Awww thiz poem iz so sad im gettin teary eyez over here but i must add ur n excellent write u juss got added 2 my favouritez!!!!5/5

Oh my god i am like sooo cryin right about now...this is a great way of expressing yourself...and i love how u beatin her to the ground...its like something that i would love to do to this "gurl"...well great job mama
love always
PrEcIoSA

=( Such a sad but great poem!! I LOVE THIS. You did such an amazing job... and I really liked how you had it in a storyline type of poem. Good job hunn

This is a really amazng poem =)

Great poem! I know what you mean about being used to broken hearts. I thought I had got lucky and found the guy that wasn't gonna hurt me this time but boy was I wrong! He broke up with me last wednesday and he broke my heart just like the rest of them. Now he's messing with one of my best friends who also happens to be married to a great guy and have a baby. It hurts to see him do this to me and to see her do this to not only me but her family. I'm not sure how to deal with this one. I haven't even wrote since then because I don't wanna write about it because I know it will hurt and even if I wanted to write about it I'm not sure what I would say. Oh my god! Please if you have any advice for me, please e-mail me asap! Thank you!