Comments : Tears In The Paint (Part III)

  • 18 years ago

    by Kurosenpai

    Wow im totally amazed i love reading your word's. Thanks for the complament on the poem you voted on and commented. continue to do the same you already know the name

  • 18 years ago

    by Avellana

    Tears invisible
    As it dries-

    I like that best. Tears are this huge thing. Its so painful, then theyre gone and there is nothing to show for it.

    Lv A, x

  • 18 years ago

    by Dreams

    Now I've come to end of this poem, though it reflects something sad, I was hoping this poem can go on and on. Very powerful poem there, like I've said, you bring me in to it and feel through it. Very well written. The ending strikes me hard, you filled these words with great sadness and pain. What a ride this is. =) Thanks for your kind comments on my poems.