Great job.. you can tell how much emotion it has in it and how much it means to you.. you did an excellent job 5/5

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

Great job.. you can tell how much emotion it has in it and how much it means to you.. you did an excellent job 5/5

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

Great job.. you can tell how much emotion it has in it and how much it means to you.. you did an excellent job 5/5

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

Great job.. you can tell how much emotion it has in it and how much it means to you.. you did an excellent job 5/5

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

Great job.. you can tell how much emotion it has in it and how much it means to you.. you did an excellent job 5/5

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

Aw wow. This was really deep. I feel like this alot though. You did an exellent job on this one. Not a thing I would change! Keep up the great work! *hugs* 5/5

`natalie xx

"i'll never show how i really feel
unless you're someone i trust
you'll never see a single tear shed
in public my pain turns to dust
but no matter what i lead you to believe
inside i am crying silently
for i know if things keep going this way
my nightmare will become my reality"

This was my favorite part i loved the ending!!! The flow was good!!! I couldnt change a thing!! 5/5!! Keep it up!!

Wow this is really really good!

Hmm...It was really long. I liked it though. It was really sad.. Great write none the less.

Love it!
its really deep and heartfelt
very well written also. keep it up:)
thanks for commenting on my poem im glad you liked it :)

xoxoxo

You have such a wonderful talent for writing! I really love reading your work!

Awww omg i can relate to this poem sooo much!! it's all true for me, and im sorry u have 2 suffer from that too, but everything will get better!! all problems have a solution! i hope urs comes soon!! =D great poem, 5/5!
~*Katherine*~

Wow I think that this might be my fave peom!

Beautiful ( sad) poem! I can relate... Well written!
~Amy