Good poem..i like it verry emotional and shows alot of feeling...good job..and please comment my poems...my newest one is confused..thanks

~allison

Hey good poem, hope da guy feels the same! thnx 4 commenting on mine :) aint spoke 2 you in AGES! lol

love mark xxx

I like it :]

I like it. I think its good but it feels like its missing something, or sounds more like a diary.

This is allright i can feel the heart in it definately! can u plz read sum of my poems and comment or help me out by reading my poem 'I need help!!!' Im not sure if it is da title but it is sumtin like dat it isnt a poem it is me askin ppl 4 advice. anyway i like this poem keep it up. xoxo

Wow, that's pretty damn awesome. Keep writing.