Oh my gosh! When I read this my heart hurt. I couldn't even imagine the pain that the girl must have. I felt so sad so fast as I read the last 2 sentences. Great job!

Oh my gosh! When I read this my heart hurt. I couldn't even imagine the pain that the girl must have. I felt so sad so fast as I read the last 2 sentences. Great job!

Omg! that is so sad.
i was expecting the other person to die but i didn't think that it would be her boyfriend!
this was a really good peom.
the rythem was excellent.
5/5

xo kisses xo

As I was reading this, I figured she would be the one that would die, I never guessed her boyfriend! This was shockingly sad.
5/5

This poem gave me chills omg, i so wasnt ecpecting that that was amazing 5/5 from me and its going in my faves.

You know i actually got up this morning anf got on this websight just to read this poem,
its sad but its good, 5/5

[~lacie~]

Holy, this is so insane. It was completely unexpected. You can tell that everyone agrees too... it definately touches home to ..good job keep it up

Omg its so good..it gave me the chills...first time it happens keep up the good work!

THIS IS A SAD STORY THAT HAPPEN 2 MY SISTER SHE DIED 2MONTHZ AGO SHE GOT IN A FIGHT WITH HER BF ND SHE HAD A CRASH BUT NOW SHE IS IN A BETTER PLACE BUT I LOVE THIS POEM I REALLY DO ITZ A GOOD POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!

This is the saddest poem I ever read. But it's so good.

I tried not to cry but i did

That was a great poem, I adore your creativity.

OMG tis is so amazing!!! i love it so much

Omg this is an amazing poem

Wow you are truly good...thats was excellent...i love it

Trust this poem to be writtin by you :) i just love all ur poems they rele r amazin.. :)

WHoa!!! that was nicely written.. excellent rhyming....I love it....It's heart breaking too...omg..I was reading it over and over again..lol..beautiful poem....

Wow... that was exspected.
i love this.
great job =]

.... This poem is from Chicken Soup for the Soul

Wow this poem i.. wow. it has such a sad ending for such a stupid mistake. very good