Wow this poem i.. wow. it has such a sad ending for such a stupid mistake. very good

Awww that so sad but really good

Its the perfect poem

W0w heart t0uching

The ending just hit me w/a full bag of chills O.O this made me cry :'(

This was amazing and it flowed beautifully with such emotion...but just a recommendation...if your poems become to depressing people might stop reading them because they don't want to always read the sad story. But as you know I love all of your stuff :)

O.M.G. !! A beautifully written poem, but such a tragic tale. Stirring emotions. Well done.!!!

Beautiful but tragic ;(

Sometimes we have to write sad stories but keep yourself centered in love otherwise you could grow mad I guess

sad at the end but good read

Oh no!

Wow