This is a great poem... me and my bf felt about eachother like this.. we still do.. only that we are going to break up... i would have to choose him or my family.. and he knows how important my family is to me.. its etheir neer see my family again or break up with him... hes makeing me choose.. so i know what i need to do.. its so hard.. i lve him always will...
ohh great poem.. i kinda went off about it huh..srry

Hey Joe!
lol the repition in this worked really well for the style, and i the form and structure were really interesting. Maybe a bit of varriation in diction-word chice- could make this that much more wonderful! lol
Much love and hope to see more soon
Jenn

Wow Joe, I love it. Im speechless hun..I dont now what to say but its beautiful work you have done and although it might not be true about you its probleby true aboout someone else! Great work and keep it up.
I LOVE YOU
xoxoJuliexoxo

Wow i can totally relate to this poem sounds like me a little while ago great work loved it and gave it a 5

Nice Granpar Joey,
whos the lucky lady, lol

Wow thats beautiful. I love it.

AWWWWWWWWWWW! THATS A GREAT POEM JOE! AWESOME WORK KEPP IT UP!

Love Rachael

Great job Im not much into love poems and I like this. I especially like this line.......................................... I want to be with you forever
to hold and to Cherish
to love till the end of all time
I want you to be mine
very heartfelt

Yeah i did it but i didnt do it your way i did it my way lol
thanks for the help anyway
I liked the words you used but they didnt flow on to the next one sorry
but it had feeling in it
thank you
Em

Good i like it

Very cliche, and over used. Yes, I know some of my poems in some way touch on this subject...but it's a little deverse. I haven't read your others material Joe, but due to the fact these types of poems are well over used and stale...3/5.

I thought you did an excellent job.. i especially liked this line

I want to be with you forever
to hold and to Cherish
to love till the end of all time
I want you to be mine

i thought it was cute.. keep it up 5/5

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