I like this poem a lot. It has a great deal of emotion and the rhyming is pretty smooth throughout the poem.

"You swore to catch me if I fell
When I did you weren't there
So I landed in a permanent hell"

I really loved these lines and relate to them a lot. The only thing about this poem is it feels like it still needs an ending, a so what to finish it off, but besides that, it is quite good.

-Mikochan

Luv the poem. Agree with Mikochan though. Keep writing, 5/5!

Em xx

That was a very well written poem
5/5
and i loved your quote
"Three people can keep a secret, if two of them are dead."
i gave it a 5/5 it was really funny