Ummm the rhyme was nice..i didn't like the topic..suicide isn't anything to mess with..it's kinda like a pass fail thing..do or die..pretty damn close..keep your head up..hit me back..peace

The rhyme was good
the poem was sad, but good
Love and Smiles. . . ally

This poem is a great short one! 5/5. :)

This poem is a great short one! 5/5. :)

Super good. Loved the last line

love Dean oxoxox