Comments : I Wish

  • 15 years ago

    by ~Black*Rose~

    This poem is just wonderfull, I usally have a very low image of poem with the same repeating line, but this poem is beyond appropriate, I love your use of words, my favorite line was
    [I wish you were my suicide
    Taking my life
    I wish that I was the blood
    Staining your knife]

    Leep writting becasue these poems are wonderfull.

  • 14 years ago

    by ImNotPerfect20

    This is a really cute poem.. it flowed well.. rhymed really well to.. Great word choice also.. 5/5 oh and it had lots of emotion in it..