Woah. I'm in love with a guy named zach....how weeeeeeird lol. sorry....

Cute poem. I'm not a very country person but it reminds me of a shania twain song....Still Together or something like that. VERY cute. Adorable actually.

Great job!

Another Good Write. Again I believe punctuation especiallycould help in this piece simply to make you words stronger. Keep on writing, you've released your emotion deep into these pieces.
--Broken.

It is ok but wrong format.

Wow girl,
thats so good i read somee of your other poems
i really like them
there very cool and speical in there own way
. u are really are good at writeing poems . i will be stopen in once in a while to see all ur new poems
so u schould keep on writeing
sorry for de spelling errors

*courtney*