Hello fallen angel, I think that your peom is very well written.I love the use of words and everything.

Cynthia

Woah, that is desperately sad... such strong writing, that's a truly great poem, you write really well... god damn that will stay in my head for a while. well done, keep writing xx

Very well written, smooth. I enjoyed reading it, though I wish you didnt have the experiance to be able to write this. You seem like a very promising writer.

Dang! i luved this one!..i don't c y it's not a 5/5, i luved it! great job!..i gave it a 5/5 tho..that's what it desservez! well, i'm here to talk to if ya want...take care!! :) xoxo

This poem has a lot of strength. it is very well written. good job

Wow this poem was amazing! its excellently written 5/5!
take care,
lots of luv,
xxEmmaxx

That was very well written i gave u a 5, i do hope that u can find ur happiness some day.

Really sad, loved it though. thanks for commenting on mine, and i hope maybe you feel better some day
polly xx

Wow! This is a wonderful poem! It made me think and i can relate to it in some ways. Your style was unique and I loved it! Keep up the awesome work! 5/5
~Luvz~
~Angie~
xoxo

This is wonderful.. and its so true sometimes people look at you and dont actually see whats hidden deep inside.. I know from person experience.. nicely written

Splendid form, very well written. You have some talent. other than a few spelling mistakes there are no corrections I could see. Keep up the work. I will look forward to reading more of your work.

5/5,

West

Another strong poem with alot of meaning in it... short sharp points!

well done

Jacs
xxx

Gr8 job with this one.. i lyk the way u can say so much in a few words.. v sad and powerful in emotion.. keep it up
hope ur ok
tc
NannO

I like this one too. its good. kinda how i feel.

I love it..one of your best!....it was very well written!,,,5/5!
~*Linz*~

Amazing you have talent keep it up