Great poem!! Really sad tho....I give it all my love
xo

Good job
i lvoe it
its great
its sad too
5/5

Omg, exellent poem. lots of emotion. i loved it.

I hope and pray your father is as touch by this poem as I am /5

God work on the poem, I'm sorry to hear about you and your father. I go through the same thing with mine, so I know how you feel.

Cheer up kiddo. It's heartbreaking I know, but I'm sure your daddy loves you, and that should be a comforting thought?.. I don't know. I'm just trying to help.

Aww... this is really sad... really good poem tho...

I dont know if u can call him dad at this point...he more like a monster...which always like to do wrong to u and thats not the way to go...but ur feelings are majorly hurt...5/5

I am so sorry for you, having to go through with this! It's so unfair. Beautiful poem!

I am so sorry of how you are feeling. I can relate, but its my mom not my dad. I haven't been with my mom since I was 8 years old and now Im 21. I know the pain you feeling. Keep your head up high. Girl it is nothing you did, your dad is the one missing out. 5/5 You are great. Keep writing these wonderful poems. It is the best way to get your emotions out.
Crystal

Thats really sad, my best friend is in the same kinda situation, im really sorry... anyways good poem. it flowed well, and was to the point.

Oh sweetie this is so raw. Trust me hon you really don't need this guy (I should know my dad left when I was nine)
You have real strength which comes through in your poems.