by Vickie
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It is mysterious and a brake from the love poems |
by Jackie Marie
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Good job :) 5/5 |
by Syn
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Awsome |
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Super poem |
by Megadrive
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That was really good! I loved it! Again only suggestion is periods and commas. Other then that... its great! |
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I love this one :) very expressive think this my favourite out of the three :) the darkness is so mysterious isn't it... when we're in pain, we like to hide into the darkness, even when its sunny outside, we still feel dark... back into that dark moment, we make things dark for ourselves... |
by Vickie
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Thanks everyone |
by Jerry Scott
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Love this poem! Nice flow and carries a lot of meaning. Keep it up! |
by avery
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Aw. |
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Wow, that was awesome. i loved it. 5/5 |
by Vickie
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Thanks everyone I really appreciate your comments!!! |
by Vickie
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Thank you everyone as I said b 4 I really appreciate your support |