Awww i'm sorry about him and you. but the poem was very nice. xoxo Rach

Babe your going to be ok just believe in urself

I liek it but I would get rid of all the dot dot dots. it takes away from the poem itself. Keep up the good work though

This was too colloquial for me...and wasn't structured enough. Too superficial somewhat..but it has caught on with many (above) so keep writing...

[lostlaureate - come find me]