I loved the flow and wording.
5/5 none to less. take care xx:

blaine *> : PainOfOne

Wow... I'm impressed. This poem is so powerful and you expressed your emotions so well. I hope you're okay though... if not I'm here to talk to anytime. Keep writing, cause you're great at it

Amazing! i loved it 5/5 xxxx

Wow! This is great!! The flow is excelllent! And very powerful poem! keep writing! xx

This poem reminds me of that feeling when you just lay down and realize that something's missing and you just don't know what it is.. That feeling of emptiness you know..

Well, I hope everything is going alright for you. Keep it up