Soulful and touching. Beautiful write. You will find that which you seek. Many times it finds you, once you stop looking. Best of luck and enjoy the search!

I know my last poem was really sad and a little dipressing...but this one gives hope to the feelings of the last one. Hope you guys like it ^_^ Take care.

Well I like it... Very creative and hopeful. A beautiful composition :)

A beautifully touching write with the message of hope.....

Hey that was really g0od. great j0b!!! beautifully written!! such t0uchng lines! keep em c0ming! =)
l0ve alwaiz /d0ra

I agree with nathoush. 5/5 i just wanna say this was a great piece of writting that you made to seem complex. im not sure i undertand the issue tho, is this new begining the break form the guy your trying to get back with>? or has this guy hurt you and you r trying to start new and look for true love? if you are looking for true love i say from experiance let it come to you. good luck anf take care. 5/5

Gesselle,

I am glad that somone has put back a smile on your face. We all go through trials and experiences and it's all part of life, but when we look back when we are old we can say that we have had a full rich life and full of meaningful experiences. Keep smiling =D

Warmest regards,

Steve

Great poem..I really do hope you find another person you can love. And don't worry, I'm sure you will.

Good Job! You express your emotions well in the words. Keep it up!

Too gud 2 b true
u have magic....

Hey great great great poem--keep it up 5/5

Beautifull..:d..keep writting girl..i loved it..:D..it really got to me..:(..
keep ur head up...!
love yah and if u have a chance plz go check out my poems

Great poem!!!!!!!!!!!