Comments : I Died..

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    That was an interesting write. t0 the p0int.. deep n p0werful. keep it up hun!

  • 18 years ago

    by ~lost*and*lonely~

    Aww this kinda made me sad but I'm really not sure why well keep it up as usual you're the best and most awesome chick out there even though i really dont know you
    love,
    Carly

  • 18 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    Intresting poem, very sad and i have to say i think i know a couple of people like this on both sides of it. nice job capturing it.

    ~Jacklyn

  • 18 years ago

    by M MEM

    This is....wow. deep. like it means so many many things. its really deep. good job.

  • 18 years ago

    by I.Dont.Own.Emotion.I.RENT.

    Awww anna this poem was sooo good! it rele makes me mad that people are like that. but dont listen to them. cuz everyone on here cares -- especially me! lyl~lex

  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    WOW whats this ;o itsbeautiful, I've never read anything like it, its like a beautiful rose, except in poetry format, absolutely amazing, great work hun

  • Another great poem babe, hold on and keep shining!

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    "asdfsdfsfsdfsfsdfsddjadjhsajsh"

    5

    am out of words...

  • 18 years ago

    by Rei

    Hey there I love this poem. Very dark and true. You did an awsome job!!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Katie.

    Really awesome job, please write more :)

  • 18 years ago

    by bleed4eternity

    Short and sweet
    amazingly written
    you have real skill when it comes to poetry

  • 18 years ago

    by Matters

    All of your poems are truly... unpredictable. In a good way. All amazing, and I truly don't know what shock I will get from the talent. I can only really say about you, to sum it up...

    YOU ROCK.

    Hey... this kind of reminds me of my poem "So Kill Me.."

    Well, fantastic again.

    Psst... My birthday is in 12 days !!

    Matt

  • 18 years ago

    by Xx-TotallyInnocent-xX

    Ohhh that was hot i like it
    check my poems out

  • 18 years ago

    by .+*Jess*+.

    Wow that was great, i have no words to describe it its amazing
    5/5!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by *puddle ov blak tears*

    Wow datz a relli strong meaning'd poem u got ther...luv'd it!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by яock godеѕѕ

    OMG WoW that was really great, i felt what you wrote.You have a talent thats for sure..Look at some of my poems and tell me what you think. Take care, Love Nat mwa

  • 18 years ago

    by Kurosenpai

    Wow great poem honest sweet and short. Check mines out if you wish

  • 18 years ago

    by TearsLeftUndried

    Good poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by Little Sin

    I`m surprised how many votes it got. Don`t take it personal.

  • 18 years ago

    by Pruedence

    Yeah it was ok