WOW! Joe, I love it. Im trying to find my favorite part but I love it all! Your poems are so good Im jealous. Keep up the GREAT work and cant wait to read more!!
Love you lots!
xoxoJuliexoxo

Hey darl. a very t0uching piece. beautifully written. great j0b!! =)
l0tz 0f l0ve /d0ra

Nice poem great emotion for one who was just thinking and not feeling 5/5

Good... it remindsme of a song.. i do by 98 degrees lol

Another great poem grandpar!

Omg joe dat poem is so gud ur such a pro at poetry keep it up take care

love Aimee xoxoxoxo

Great write, i'm shocked it isn't true, the emotion seemed very real. Amazing

Joe Joe ....hey how r ya well that was a great poem i really love it....acually i love all of ur poems lol....well keep writen ur very good and i love 2 read them .....
luv ya lotz cassieeeeeee lol
(sry im like really hypre 2day lol)

Wow that was amazing, I just can't believe that it wasn't real, the emotions just seemed so real to me. Great Job, keep up the great work.5/5

This is an awesome poem i love it. its so meaningful and deep. keep it up

Awwww.... good job.. well expressed. i wish i had someone to share my life with like you... i sometimes feel so worthless inside.... wonderful poem. well expressed. excellent job! 5/5!

lots of love and hugs, always,

michelle

I like it...Most of your poems are great, I just think you could add more to them..It would make them so much better!! BUT I love em all, even if they are a bit short...:P

~Always4You~

Wow, thats really touching. A guy could definately serenade me with this poem :) 5/5

~Kelly~

....btw..I was just wondering about your name "Italian Stallion"..? I think we might've met on yahoo pool before...Idk, just wondering...it could've been someone else with the same screen name, who knows? :P

Very well written dear!
love ur work!

Great job.. your an excellent poet.. this poem is so cute.. keep it up.. and take care..

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

This is beautiful, Joe!

Very sweet, loving and romantic!!

(Every "your" needs to be "you're")

Great work!

Very good i really liked this one too keep up the good work.

Wow joey..liked this poem tons...made me almost cry. lol keep up the good work five all the way

vaney

You're the one I trust
you're the one I want to touch
I'll always be right here for you
and I hope you can be there for me too

so much love is in this paragraph. well done and keep writing. cause i love your poems.

5/5 david