Words of hope speak up

by The heart the soul the love   Dec 17, 2005


No one can ever know what's on your mind
You're undefined
Except things with arms wide open
Nothing goes unspoken
Speak your mind
Let your words be refined
With your pen in hand
Take the unplanned
And turn it to good
Let it stand out and not be misunderstood
Lets your words be illuminated
By Their; minds don't be sedated
So take my words of hope
don't let is slip away like soap
And speak up
Let your words be like an abstractly painted cup
This is where your book begins
As I listen to you and hear your word a wisdom as it sings
And take your pen
And start over again

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  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Some of the rhymes sem a little forced, but other than that a billiant peice

  • 18 years ago

    by Innocent Danger

    I like this one to!

  • 18 years ago

    by Jerrys¤baby¤girl

    VERY GOOD!!! i love all of your poems and if you keep writing i will keep writing
    Love Always, Tiffany Heather

  • 18 years ago

    by APoeticLetdown

    I like this one, but I think you focused too hard on rhyming that some lines lost their touch, but i like the overall poem, cute, but not overly.

  • 18 years ago

    by (*andrea*hurtinside*)

    This was good. I liked your rhyme scheme. Words like hope and soap and up and cup.